英语达人帮忙改点东西my name is .and you can just call me ,because my Chinese nickname is and these two words are same word in Chinese.so i choose it to be my english name.I was born in XXXX in .I know lots of people never heard about this c

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英语达人帮忙改点东西my name is .and you can just call me ,because my Chinese nickname is and these two words are same word in Chinese.so i choose it to be my english name.I was born in XXXX in .I know lots of people never heard about this c

英语达人帮忙改点东西my name is .and you can just call me ,because my Chinese nickname is and these two words are same word in Chinese.so i choose it to be my english name.I was born in XXXX in .I know lots of people never heard about this c
英语达人帮忙改点东西
my name is .and you can just call me ,because my Chinese nickname is and these two words are same word in Chinese.so i choose it to be my english name.
I was born in XXXX in .I know lots of people never heard about this city.is the 5th big city in China and at northeast of China.also is a fantastic city and very important in this world.
When I was 7 years old,I began study at school,and I really like to studied Math and Science.Then I studied at No.XXX middle school of .That is a really good middle school in .During that time,I really like Math,Physical and Chinese.At that time I began to define my goal in my life.That is I want to have my own business in future.And I knew the .business is summit of the world,even Global Economic Crisis.So when I graduate from middle school,I came to .Now I study program at .But my goal is to open my own business,so I choose accounting at .
As we all know,is a really famous college in and very good at business.I will go all our to study at ,during 2 years.I believe I will have enough ability to transfer to ,and others which in education system.I believe I can do it at .will help me to get that goal.
Thanks your time to read my writing.I really hope you can admit me.Thank you so much.
Sincerely,

英语达人帮忙改点东西my name is .and you can just call me ,because my Chinese nickname is and these two words are same word in Chinese.so i choose it to be my english name.I was born in XXXX in .I know lots of people never heard about this c
I know that lots of people...
5th biggest city in northeast of China...(后面就不需要了)
when i was 7,i started my primary school,i really enjoyed studying math and science.
No.xxx was my middle school,which is still the best school in my city.
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that is that i want to my own ……in future……
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