英文段子检查语法错误~I most want to go to the United states.frist of all,there have The Statue of liberty.that’s a lot meaning for me ,this statue is my spirit idol When I was a little girl.Secondly.There are the best universties.like Har

英文段子检查语法错误~I most want to go to the United states.frist of all,there have The Statue of liberty.that’s a lot meaning for me ,this statue is my spirit idol When I was a little girl.Secondly.There are the best universties.like Har
英文段子检查语法错误~
I most want to go to the United states.
frist of all,there have The Statue of liberty.that’s a lot meaning for me ,this statue is my spirit idol When I was a little girl.
Secondly.There are the best universties.like Harvard,yale,stanford,and so on.that was my childhood dream .
Finally ,I love shopping ,there are many famous brands,like chanel,Prada,Hermes and can be discount.so I’m dying for those big brands.

英文段子检查语法错误~I most want to go to the United states.frist of all,there have The Statue of liberty.that’s a lot meaning for me ,this statue is my spirit idol When I was a little girl.Secondly.There are the best universties.like Har
there have The Statue of liberty.
there不是名词哈
可改为 the statue of liberty lies in new york
best universties.like like前面的是句点?
brand只是牌子 最好改成name brand shops
……,Prada,Hermes and can be discount
这是= =
可以讲 and they may be at a deep discount !

most改为mostly，there后面不能用have，that was my childhood dream中was改成is。there are many famous brands,like chanel,Prada,Hermes 这就是一句话后面不用and了，and can be discount再重新改成一句话。

The place I mostly want to go is Unites States, the reasons are shown below.
frist of all,United States has the Statue of liberty. It means a lot for me to visit there, this statue was my spirit i...

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The place I mostly want to go is Unites States, the reasons are shown below.
frist of all,United States has the Statue of liberty. It means a lot for me to visit there, this statue was my spirit idol When I was a little girl.
Second, there are many famous universties such as Harvard,yale,stanford and so on.It was my childhood dream to study in one of thoes universities.
At last, I love shopping. There are many shops of famous brands like chanel,Prada,Hermes, and they always have discounts in United States. I'm deadly loving those big brands.

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