评价英语短文请评价下这篇短文,如果有错误请各位更改一下.好的追分I am an ordinary person.Of course,I have one nose and two eyes.It is easy for you to discover it!I am an ordinary student.From Monday to Friday,I have to go t

评价英语短文请评价下这篇短文,如果有错误请各位更改一下.好的追分I am an ordinary person.Of course,I have one nose and two eyes.It is easy for you to discover it!I am an ordinary student.From Monday to Friday,I have to go t
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请评价下这篇短文,如果有错误请各位更改一下.好的追分
I am an ordinary person.Of course,I have one nose and two eyes.It is easy for you to discover it!
I am an ordinary student.From Monday to Friday,I have to go to school as other student.On weekends,I have to go to study something too.
I think I am good at studying,but I’m not good at exam.I seldom get good scores,I often make some small mistakes.Although I seldom good scores,I never give up.I think once I try my best,I will get it repaid.In many ways,I am not the best one,but I never give up.I always try it again and again,when I get in trouble.Finally,I often succeeded.
Never give up,this is me.
Never give up,I am who I am!
现在怎么样?………………
I am an ordinary person.Of course,I have one nose and two eyes.It is easy for you to discover it!
I am an ordinary student.From Monday to Friday,I have to go to school as other student.
I am good at studying,but I’m not good at exam.I seldom get good scores,I often make some small mistakes.Although I seldom good scores,I never give up.I think once I try my best,I will get it repaid.I didn’t know how to ride bike until 12 years old.In a summer vacation,my mum asked me to learn ride a bike.At the beginning,I can't keep balanced at all.I fell on the ground again and again.My leg hurt,my arm hurt.But I didn’t give up.Finally,I learned how to ride a bike.Now,I always go to school by bike.
In many ways,I am not the best one,but I never give up.When I get in trouble,I always try it again and again.
Never give up,this is me.
公主,你敢不抄别人的吗?

评价英语短文请评价下这篇短文,如果有错误请各位更改一下.好的追分I am an ordinary person.Of course,I have one nose and two eyes.It is easy for you to discover it!I am an ordinary student.From Monday to Friday,I have to go t
内容评论：空洞,口号太多.废话不少.逻辑错误很多.
即使语言没有任何错误,也只能拿及格分（在中国）,在国外,不及格.
am an ordinary person.Of course,I have one nose and two eyes.It is easy for you to discover it!
没有说清楚的你的特征.最后一句和上文没有逻辑关系.
I am an ordinary student.From Monday to Friday,I have to go to school as other studentS.On weekends,I have to go to study something too.
周末学什么?没说.
I think I am good at studying,没有这个说法的 but I’m not good at exam.I seldom get good scores,I often make some small mistakes.Although I seldom good scores,I never give up.I think once I try my best,I will get it repaid.In many ways,I am not the best one,but I never give up.I always try it 指代不明again and again,when I get in trouble.Finally,I often succeeded.时态不对
Never give up,this is me.
Never give up,I am who I am!
口号喊得很响.
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