美国商务签证英文邀请函 大家帮看看有什么错漏吗Date: 22nd August 2010 To: Lianyong Industry part,Beifeng Town Shijiazhuang city hebei province,chinaShijiazhuang Jinglong Automobile Parts Co., Ltd.Attention: CHEN WEIFro

美国商务签证英文邀请函 大家帮看看有什么错漏吗Date: 22nd August 2010 To: Lianyong Industry part,Beifeng Town Shijiazhuang city hebei province,chinaShijiazhuang Jinglong Automobile Parts Co., Ltd.Attention: CHEN WEIFro
美国商务签证英文邀请函 大家帮看看有什么错漏吗
Date: 22nd August 2010
To: Lianyong Industry part,Beifeng Town Shijiazhuang city hebei province,china
Shijiazhuang Jinglong Automobile Parts Co., Ltd.
Attention: CHEN WEI
From: XXXX Co., Ltd
August 22, 2010
XXXX Co., Ltd
Address
Tel:( ) Fax:( )
INVITATION LETTER
It is hereby to invite Mr. CHEN with passport No. Gxxxxxxxx, born in September 22nd, 1973, to XXX Co., Ltd from 10th Jan. 2011 for some business with us to develop new products. All expenses will be covered by Shijiazhuang Jinglong Automobile Parts Co., Ltd. during his stay in U.S..
Yours sincerely,
General Manager
XXXX Co., Ltd

美国商务签证英文邀请函 大家帮看看有什么错漏吗Date: 22nd August 2010 To: Lianyong Industry part,Beifeng Town Shijiazhuang city hebei province,chinaShijiazhuang Jinglong Automobile Parts Co., Ltd.Attention: CHEN WEIFro
Date:August 22,2010
To:Lianyong Industry Park,Beifeng Town,Shijiazhuang City,Hebei Province,China
Shijiazhuang Jinglong Automobile Parts Co.,Ltd.
Attention:CHEN WEI
From:XXXX Co.,Ltd.
August 22,2010
XXXX Co.,Ltd.
Address:
Tel:( ) Fax:( )
INVITATION LETTER
This is to invite Mr.CHEN Wei,with passport No.Gxxxxxxxx,born on September 22,1973,to visit XXX Co.,Ltd.,starting from January 10,2011,for business purposes over the development of new products.All expenses related to his visit will be covered by Shijiazhuang Jinglong Automobile Parts Co.,Ltd.during his stay in U.S.
Yours sincerely,
General Manager
XXXX Co.,Ltd.
注意事项：
1 专有名词要大写
2 日期格式要统一（月、日、年）,月份缩写与否,日期带缀与否
3 标点符号后要空格

认为你的这个General Manager换一下吧
反正我也是不怎么懂
具体的还是问一下别人吧

你这个一看就是中式英文，
为什么邀请你们的公司不给你们写那？